Thursday, April 4, 2019

Anzac poem

At the moment in room five we are learning about Anzac Day so we decided to make some poems about it and use this photo to guide us . Here is my poem I have wrote. 



The ground I rest my feet on is hard and solid I then feel it shake I know we are under attack,
 as it is happening I can hear my mum saying goodbye  and this might just be my last time I can hear her sweet voice call out to me.  

I then fire to save myself, but it’s too late because I find myself lying on the solid ground,  where the poppies 
Grow, 
it’s now the end so I must go,
You will remember me as I stay in your hearts 
Lest you forget, remember me. 

6 comments:

  1. Hi Tahlia I'm Connor from Sacred Heart School Reefton. I liked your Anzac day poem. Your poem really reminded me about how we should respect others that went to war. I think its great but you need to fix up a couple spelling words. How long did it take you to make this.

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  4. Tahlia i like your poem maybe try to make it less sad

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  5. hi tahila i like your poem maybe its a little to sad

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  6. Hi Tahila my name is Carla I like your poem can you make it less sad.

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