The ground I rest my feet on is hard and solid I then feel it shake I know we are under attack,
as it is happening I can hear my mum saying goodbye and this might just be my last time I can hear her sweet voice call out to me.
I then fire to save myself, but it’s too late because I find myself lying on the solid ground, where the poppies
Grow,
it’s now the end so I must go,
You will remember me as I stay in your hearts
Lest you forget, remember me.
Hi Tahlia I'm Connor from Sacred Heart School Reefton. I liked your Anzac day poem. Your poem really reminded me about how we should respect others that went to war. I think its great but you need to fix up a couple spelling words. How long did it take you to make this.
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ReplyDeleteTahlia i like your poem maybe try to make it less sad
ReplyDeletehi tahila i like your poem maybe its a little to sad
ReplyDeleteHi Tahila my name is Carla I like your poem can you make it less sad.
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