Now I am on to my fifth activity, and for this one we had think that we were on the journey to the moon like Neil Armstrong and write a poem about it. Hope you enjoy my poem.
It was lovely to get to read your awesome poem! I really like how you have included Neil Armstrong's famous quote in your poem! Have you heard of Neil Armstrong before?
If you are interested in learning more about poems you can read more about how to write them here! https://www.google.com/url?q=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.poetry4kids.com%2Flessons%2Fpoetry-writing-lessons%2F&sa=D&sntz=1&usg=AFQjCNEnd9ZtEbSormeNq10mnIOq270-tw This is a great resource and will prove handy for all poem writing!
Your poem was amazing! I loved how you used rhyming words and the writing really shows how the person felt. For some reason some people think that the Apollo 11 flight did not happen. What do you think? Do you have any relatives that have worked around the space interior?
Would you ever like to go to space? It's cool how you made everything nice and grey. What sort of poem was it? Maybe next time you could remember to write down where you got the pictures.
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Hi again Tahlia!
ReplyDeleteIt was lovely to get to read your awesome poem! I really like how you have included Neil Armstrong's famous quote in your poem! Have you heard of Neil Armstrong before?
If you are interested in learning more about poems you can read more about how to write them here!
https://www.google.com/url?q=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.poetry4kids.com%2Flessons%2Fpoetry-writing-lessons%2F&sa=D&sntz=1&usg=AFQjCNEnd9ZtEbSormeNq10mnIOq270-tw
This is a great resource and will prove handy for all poem writing!
Keep up the great work!
Gabe
Thanks Gabe for this nice and thoughtful comment I will definitely use this website next time when I write a poem.
ReplyDeleteGood stuff Tahlia!
DeleteHope you are enjoying your holidays, are you doing anything amazing for them?
Keep up the great work,
Gabe
Hi Tahlia,
ReplyDeleteYour poem was amazing! I loved how you used rhyming words and the writing really shows how the person felt. For some reason some people think that the Apollo 11 flight did not happen. What do you think? Do you have any relatives that have worked around the space interior?
Would you ever like to go to space? It's cool how you made everything nice and grey. What sort of poem was it? Maybe next time you could remember to write down where you got the pictures.
Make sure you comment on other peoples blogs to get more points!
Amazing job, Tahlia!
From Sophie