At the moment in room five we have been writing about plastic and what plastic is made out of so we have had to describe the Plastic Toy Shop. In our writing we have had to put in present tense , use my senses, precise nouns and adjectives so that we have a successful piece of writing. So we wanted to write about plastic because we want it to stop because it is having a big impact on the environment. So here is my writing about the plastic toy shop.
Plastic Invasion
I creep into the plastic kingdom and feel a pop of neon coloured toys surrounding me in every step I take. The sounds of faded whispers at the back of the shop with the clicking of the keys from the keyboard are getting on my nerves.
Plastic, it’s everywhere! As I walk some more and glance up a crowd of yellow ducks are invading the shelves from top to bottom and hanging on the wall beside me are swarms of plastic guns with more and more toys everywhere.
I then sniff up a whiff of rubber toys and start to go dizzy but then recover and step in the middle of the neon coloured toys and then look behind me and see an employee trying to convince me that plastic is good but I refuse to even touch one then all of the plastic collapses on top of me and it is like swimming in a sea of plastic I can no longer get out of the shop I feel disgusted about all of this plastic. It needs to stop! So let’s get to work.
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